It gives a very accurate picture of Sophie's room. It has a great layout because of the way that my comfy double bed gets most of the sun.As you open the door to my bedroom a sudden warmth invites you in. My parents will not let me turn up the heat. Across from that is an immense window, and finally, a built in wardrobe, containing various unfolded garments. These are 5 words you would use to describe my bedroom. But quite a fun place to fool around. 4-. I love my bedroom and I wish you guys could see it person so you can see how and why I love my bedroom. Some names needed capitals. It also has a table which is made from birch. Everyone wants to have the perfect bedroom, the best way to do that is to make it your own. My bedroom is the room straight ahead of the hallway it has the great things that most bedrooms have a theme, colors, bed and a carpet and those are the four topics I will tell you about. If you have a brother or sister whos bedroom is usually dark and smelly, you perhaps might call their bedroom a swamp, too! The coziest of It, I'll admit my room is the coziest in the house.and that's how I like, warm covers,warm mattress and my relaxing spot. People say their home I love it because it is the only room in my house where I can lock myself away from the rest of the world. At the back of my room there is a large window exposing the magnificent mountains covered in a blanket of snow, my other window gives a happy view of a fence which we share with our neighbour. Reuben has provided a spot on description of his room. I dont know if food plates count as accessories because if they do i have a lot of accessories. If you were to say that your office was your home, you would be saying that youre always at the office! I have an adorable tiger painting above my bed. e.g, the size of your bed, and the colours of your bed covers. I could clearly see your room just by the way you described it. It's good that he loves his room and his own space. I have recently changed around my room. You could work on the adjectives but otherwise very good. Wow Megan that was amazing I really liked that one. Describe The Room Your In Describe the room you are in Dark, empty and cool; I gaze ahead at the room before me, with only the sound of the air conditioner thrumming. Your description was great I really liked the way that you told the reader little extra things about the sub heading. It may be the view of the mountain you see out my window or maybe the blue colour scheme or maybe even all the photographs on my crisp white walls. The decoration part for my room. The bright stuff in my room are mainly the walls, desk and drawers, my room gets a lot brighter when I open the curtains because my windows are a basically a wall itself, but with a window that big everything ends up being brighter during the day and night in the summer which is a problem (even with the curtains pulled). The layout of my medium-sized hideout is spacious, and being L shaped, it permits a reasonably large area to dance crazily around, spend quality time with friends or complete therapeutic craft activities. My room has many accessories, there is pictures, paintings, plants and other things too. So my bed is messy, but in general my room isnt all that messy. I suck creamy cock. My bedroom is the coldest room in the whole house I wake up with a wet floor because of where it sits. The furniture in my room is quite tight. 2. But all of this is because the entire house is new, in fact it's not even finished!, although with all these bonuses I don't go into my bedroom that often. There is a slight problem with my room. Great detail in your paragraphs Jessie. This answers first letter of which starts with S and can be found at the end of Y. But thankfully, I dont have to suffer these flaws much longer, because in the holidays, Ill be moving rooms and Ill have the smallest but sunniest room in the house. The grey carpet is soft and oddly soothing underfoot. Its normally just a mucked up pile of sheets and she is always nagging me to make my bed and or clean my room. My curtains are dark blue so if a have a sleep in the day it seems like it's night. I want to be out playing with my friends.. Colors are a big part in my bedroom because the colors describe who I am and what my personality is like because I am a person who prefers darker colors. The darker colors in my room are mainly my wardrobe doors and my duvet, my duvet is black, grey and a dark orange. But one thing that does make it dirty is my bird Percy, he leaves his seeds all over the floor and makes it the messiest. I have 3 words to describe my dutches brown, soft, wooden it has five drawers 2 side by side then 3 long ones below each other. So my layout might be tight, but it works for me. There are loads of different earrings dangling off of a metal sheet, which is shaped into a dog. There is clothes such as shirts and shorts mixed in with stuffed toys and shoes. Beside the desk, in pride of place, is my single bed. Similes and metaphors create strong imagery when used sparingly. Im proud to call it mine. Well my room is very messy I hate tidying my room I alway have clothes all over the floor. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it and can tell you a story about my personality, if you read on you will know about my personality and go for a virtual journey through my bedroom. The place that I hang out in, do homework and well of course, sleep. It's a great description but like Alex said, you could give it more ideas and elaborate more on the topic to make it a better description. It is a square shape and it is warm. The best bit about our carpet is it is always warm from under floor heating. Clothes everywhere all over the floor and I have no way of knowing if they are clean or dirtyI certainly don't want to smell them! Next time try not to use extra commas where they were not supposed to be. There is a massive window in front of you as you walk into my bedroom. Opposite my window is my cupboard. As you walk up the old skinny hallway, at the end, opposite the bathroom, you will find a bedroom,which you'd agreed looks like a bomb has gone off and spread all the junk everywhere, and yes its my bedroom, possibly the messiest in the house. My walls are white with dark wooden paneling. We're i can't use it when i'm in my bed! And it sits on the other side of the room! Above my bed there are another three picture that my mum had embroidered for us when we were little. Great writing Shadyn really liked it, I still ant that ps4 of yours though! This is placed in the left hand corner underneath my window. The background color of my wall is light sea blue. Try next time to make some of your objects more descriptive and not just the colours. The rooms style of the room is old rugged modern and not really cared about but that's what makes it mine. It is a very modern bedroom, with a tropical theme. My bedroom is the best place in the house because of the way that it gets the warmth of the sun, the way that it has my favorite colour as a feature wall and because everyone in my family is jealous of it. Just next time check carefully because the odd word was spelt wrong. Ano ang pinakamaliit na kontinente sa mundo? On one side of the room has a bunk bed where the bottom bunk is a double and the top is a single. You could add information on what you think about your room and why you like it. The tv, my tv is a black 32 inch philips tv which is about 9 years old but It's still works good. I give a 4. When I look out the window I also see the mountains and some time you can see car lights on the side of the mountain when it is dark. I don't think you've left out a single thing about your room :), This sounds like the room I have been in there is lots of detail.The ending paragraph is great to end the description, This sounds very descriptive. In the corner by my door is my double bed, in the other is my desk and stool. When you walk into my room you will see famous NBA (National Basketball Administration) players, such as Kobe Bryant, Michael Jordan and Allen Iverson it's like my gold to my treasure box. I am going to tell you four things about my bedroom. well done, BRIDGETS BEDROOM In your writing I have noticed that you need to improve the proper use of functuation. I have a few pillows that sit on my bed and I think that they help tie my room and it's theme together. must suck cock. By my creamy white door there is a place where I hang up all my achievements such as medals, certificates and much more over top of that there is a glow in the dark poster I find that really youneek because it looks really cool when it's night. My half of the bedroom is on the east side of the house, meaning that Im directly in front of one of our three gardens. The best part about having a themed bedroom is that it makes me more relaxed when I come home from a long day at school. Next to that there is 2 shelfs about 1 meter long one is 30 centimeters higher than the other the bottom one is black and the top one is white and on top is legos that I built when I was young. The color of my wardrobe connected to my wall is black I would probably want to change the color to the same as the wall. Feedback - It's good that you have the nouns and you have a bit of detail in them but add more. Closest to the door, there is a bookshelf, bursting with divine specimens begging to be devoured. When you walk into my bedroom you will see three different colours starting at the entrance and going all the way through the room. I like this description of your bed room. 3-. Style , layout , accessories and furniture are the 4 best qualities about my bedroom because that's what makes it mine. Looking a bit further up you can see a sky light, the plastic that covers it from the reflective tube in the attic isnt fastened properly so if somebody slams a door somewhere it vibrates and makes such a commotion. Every morning I need to make sure my bed is neat and tidy. Nishmat Kol Chai In Russian, I like how I am able to visualize your bedroom. You have missed out on some things ie. Your punctuation is also correct, and I didn't see any wrong. One of the skateboards is a cruiser board (a small skateboard you cruise around on) I won at a competition, handmade by a local skateboard maker in Raglan. I think that your ideas are great, they describe your room well. I think you edited the grammar well with making it make sense but there were a few spelling mistakes and no capitals for I I wouldnt mind a bigger bed, though! After a long day, all i want to do is go up tom my cosy bedroom and either listen to some mellow music, or lie down, unwind and watch a bit of T.V or maybe even a relaxing film. Examples of Popular Metaphors All the worlds a stage, and all the men and women merely players. William Shakespeare I am the good shepherdand I lay down my life for the sheep. The Bible, John 10:14-15 All our words are but crumbs that fall down from the feast of the mind.Khalil Gibran your bedroom is like the inside of your head (simile). In the summer it reaches a boiling point the duvets on the bed gets thinner and thinner and it gets harder to catch some sleep. The rest of the walls are a nice white color and it goes with the furniture that is against it. The sight can be sometimes messy, with my clothes everywhere. THOMASS BEDROOM Another person who might call their home a prison could be someone who feels like theyre sick of being at home on vacation and wants to go back to school. and at night when it's extremely cold I turn on my speedy heating friend my electric blanket and snuggle right down into my black and white duvet and my purple fluffy sheets. I have a brown drawers to keep all of my clothes in. Sometimes a little bit of exaggeration creates the best metaphors. Three quarters of my room is engulfed in clothes and mess. You can see the green and purple lettuce growing in the sauna like glass house and the drenched clothes hanging on the washing line. Accessories, accessories are big in my room because I picked them personally and they were given to me as gifts but they are apart of my favorite things. -3, Brody, I like your writing. Be good to keep the clothes off the floor! Youll find that my beds always made in the morning, and the clothes arent all scattered across the floor unlike the rest of my family. The final part of the room is the space, the space of the room is kinda small which is a good thing because that mean that I can do cool ping pong trick shots. However, if you cautiously open the drawer, it looks as if a bomb has exploded inside. What I would really like though is some more storage because there is not a lot of space to put my belongings. Personally would like a orange feature wall in my bedroom but when you're renting a house you have to have permission to do so. I like the layout, colors, furniture and the style it has a red feature wall (my favorite color). I like my room because it is my own space. Create your own unique website with customizable templates. My blinds are a creamy, white colour that go all the way to the floor. I like the way you described it and detailed all of your ideas in paragraphs. My bedroom. My pictures, my belongings, my personal space. Megan your vocab was very good with describing things. On the other side of my bed, sits the divider that holds all of my well-loved books and DVDs. If you are 13 years old when were you born? My carpet, I like my carpet Dont get me wrong I like the light creamy color that gets me comfy, I like the nice pillow feeling of it and how it eases me to sleep really quickly. My bedroom is exactly the way I like it, there is a chair in the corner which is very comfortable. Well done!!! My favourite part of my room sitting next to the window is my single bed. Its a room I am proud to call my own. My clothes they are placed in piles beside the wall because my dad has not got any draws for the room. Use adjectives. All of the furniture is pretty old for example the punk bed is about five years old and the dresser is about eight but its still in good condition. There are two mirrors in the room the one im going to describe is the one connected to a table in my room. 4+, Nice work describing your room. Then the bedside table is nearly crammed in the top left hand corner. Good description of your bedroom (mess and all). I have a lot of special objects in my bedroom. and there is no conclusion or ending paragraph. I have modern tropical theme with orange and blue striped sheets with a blue duva. As I wade through the swamp of clutter I find things I lost from months ago. A lumpy duvet lies messily on the thick mattress that cradles me at night. When you look around my room you can see a whole bunch of different things, if you climb above all the dirty clothes, theres all of my furniture, my radiator and a whole load of colours. The vocobulary is very good aswell. Good description Annie. 4+. My bed, My bed is a single bed it is in my opinion very noisy but also very comfy. I am going to take you on a mental journey around my bedroom. My bedroom is special to me because it's where I can go to get alone time and just relax it's pretty smelly but it's a cozy warm layout that is just for me. In my room I have lots of draws and places to put stuff but hardly use any of because most stuff is on the floor. So, if you referred to your home as a retreat, you would be saying that your home is a peaceful place to escape from the world belong. There is a queen single bed covered in a white duvet and patterned blanket in the centre. Big books and small books. The floor in my bedroom. WILL HS BEDROOM Lots of descriptive words and nouns and adjectives make for interesting writing and make it really easy to read. In my room I also have a painting the my Aunty drew for me, It is a huge field of wheat with huts in them but no people from what you can see. 3, Great description Hayden, you forgot to mention the constant piles of washing in it! By my bed there is a little bedside table with a plant and fairy lights that sit on it, this is also where I charge my laptop and phone. Mine is to the right of the door and facing it, whereas Sams is directly in front of the door facing towards it too. Room Metaphors and Similes. I dont really have any toys, My room has a lot of matching colors because my room is a modern color. It has a dark deep blue background with the flowers painted in a yellow so light it is almost white, the brush strokes carefully placed to show the wind gently blowing the flowers. There is a similar popular simile that means the same thing: my home looks like a bomb hit it. I hope you have had a virtual journey of what my bedroom looks like, have been taken through a story of my bedroom and know why I like my bedroom. On the other side of the room is my chair with my blanket that fades from blue to white. make sure it's extra creamy!!! My bedside table is black with sticker brands covering them. Next time try used some words less for example the word 'and'. If you walk into my room your senses would explode because of the smell, sight, sound, touch. I think Bridget's description of her room is fairly accurate. I can count around 30 pieces of paper, old, stray certificates, none used or cared for. Running down the old wooden corridor a floorboard squeaked underneath my pounding feet. There are books all over the place. Overall I like my room more than hate it, for it has my favorite things and it is where I spend the most time, because I sleep there. The sun shines through my room during the day and makes my room look light. In my bedroom standing in the doorway looking at it. it is good. So I have my bed on the left wall and on the other side of my bedroom is my tv cabinet. 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